NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS!

Tiêu đề: NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS! Tue 7 Oct 2008 - 8:57

Our topic today is DREAM. This is not what we do or see when we sleep, in contrast, it is all about what we are still alive and work for our whole lives. This is our wishes or what we desire to enjoy better lives. Well, I’m sure that all of the people here have their own dreams. The dreams might occur since we were very young and get bigger and bigger through the time. Actually, when you were a child, you just want to have a pack of candies like the one that your friend were holding in his hands, but when you get older, you want something more important, more valuable like position in society, a lot of money, a high building to live…. Some want to be doctors to help people and earn a lot of money from their work, some want to be millionaires for luxury life without working, some want to travel around the world to broaden their mind, or some just wish to have a happy family just like me. The dreams are important or not important, become the target for you to shoot or just a fleeting thought depending on what you did, do and will do for your dreams or what roles they play on your lives.
I have a lot of dreams for myself. These dreams seem to be the moral support that can push me up when I'm feeling down. By dreaming of a brighter future, I help myself to continue striving for the things I want in life.
This is how to depict my dreams that I leaned from the foreign teachers. I HOPE THAT YOU GUYS HERE WILL JOIN AND TRY TO EXPRESS YOUR DREAMS LIKE WHAT I'M GOING TO DO. NO SHYNESS < PLEASE!
I have dreams. I have a dream that one day I can swim as well as my father who is very good at swimming. I love the sea and everything belongs to the sea. I dream that one day I can swim and dive in the deep blue sea to enjoy the water life below with many various kinds of fishes and colorful coral ranges. That dream gives me comfort and makes me love my life more than before.
But that is not enough for me. I also dream that I will be a more patient person. Sometimes I am so irritable. I often loose my temper if something happens that I do not expect or when I get in troubles. Losing my temper does not help me solve anything. In fact, that usually causes me to get stuck into other troubles and sometimes I make my friends sad and even make myself feel regretful. Now, I am trying to get rid of that habit, but it seems that the fire inside me is still waiting to blaze up. So, I am still dreaming. I dream someday I will become a gentle and patient person. Whenever I get into trouble, I will be able to keep calm and deal with my troubles. This will help me in my job and it will also help me have and keep a lot of good friends.
I also have a dream that .... Well, I should give space your you to express your dreams...
What are your dreams?? (JUST WRITE LIKE WHAT I DID)

Tiêu đề: Re: NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS! Wed 8 Oct 2008 - 8:15

Dreams...
I dream everynight. ^^!
Sometime it's nice dream, but sometime it's nightmare ~.~!
Swimming!yeah, i like swimming, and i tried to swim. At now, I can swim (although not so well ~.~!, my father can swim very good, too ^^).
When I was a child, I had a lot of dreams. Sometime I wish I'll a pilot. Sometime I wish I'll a teacher. Sometime i wish I'll a navy because I love the sea and ships ^^. I can't become a navy, so I chose shipbuilding ^^!
I used to envy when I see other children was taken by their parents on motobike. That time, I wished my parents had been millionaire! And I know poor life make me alway try to be not a poor (=3=)
At the moment, I wish I'll graduate and become a good engineer.
With my job in future, I can help my family's life better.
With my job in future, I'll be selfconfident for ..courting a girl ^^!

That's all!
p/s: I have more ideas, but I can't show them because my English level isn't too high ~.~! Overcoming my ashamed feeling and writing it are my exploit!
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Tiêu đề: Re: NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS! Thu 9 Oct 2008 - 3:22

Nowadays, we have a happy life because our fathers dedicated all their lives to get our independence. So we must save, protect and develop our nation.
Our country is a developing country. Therefore, there are many problems that need to be solved in order to make our lives better.
It is said that children like buds on the tree and they are naive and pure like glass. They need to be taken care of and protected. However, today, our country has too many children who don’t have families or homes. They must sleep in the market, under a bridge or on the pavement in the evening. They also must do anything they can such as selling lottery tickets, cleaning shoes, etc in order to earn money to live instead of going to school. If they can not earn money, they will be hungry. And there is no choice but to beg for foods from others. They have no future.
Ho Chi Minh said that children should do work that is suitable for children and up to their strength. But many children must do work that is suitable only for adults and they also suffer violence from their bosses.
I have a dream that one day these things will not still happen and these children, who don’t have families, will have houses to live in, foods to eat and clothes to wear. I have a dream that one day these children will go to school the sane as other children. I have a dream that one day all children will live in happiness. That is my hope. And I believe that you and I will try our best so that this dream will soon become reality.

Tiêu đề: Re: NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS! Thu 9 Oct 2008 - 4:39

Anh2Long đã viết:: Dreams...
I dream everynight. ^^!
Sometime it's nice dream, but sometime it's nightmare ~.~!
Swimming!yeah, i like swimming, and i tried to swim. At now, I can swim (although not so well ~.~!, my father can swim very good, too ^^).
When I was a child, I had a lot of dreams. Sometime I wish I'll a pilot. Sometime I wish I'll a teacher. Sometime i wish I'll a navy because I love the sea and ships ^^. I can't become a navy, so I chose shipbuilding ^^!
I used to envy when I see other children was taken by their parents on motobike. That time, I wished my parents had been millionaire! And I know poor life make me alway try to be not a poor (=3=)
At the moment, I wish I'll graduate and become a good engineer.
With my job in future, I can help my family's life better.
With my job in future, I'll be selfconfident for ..courting a girl ^^!

That's all!
p/s: I have more ideas, but I can't show them because my English level isn't too high ~.~! Overcoming my ashamed feeling and writing it are my exploit! >

I would like to say that You did a very good job, that 's more than what I expected. Congratulation!
You know, I have a dream that one day there will be more people taking part in my DREAM... hehe
There are 2 things I would like you to improve:
Firstly, you should use the SIMPLE PAST TENSE when talking about your PAST dream. like: "I wish I woud be a pilot...." , all the thing you should use the simple Past tense with "Would". If you talk about the dream in the furure, it's ok to use the SIMPLE FUTURE TENSE.
Secondly, Notice that Will + be (am/is/are) like: '' will be a navy"
or Will + Verb -infintive
And one more thing, "I'll be selfconfident TO court a girl..." ( not for courting..)
Though you made just some mistakes, the ideas are really good. You did show your dream and I can imagine what your dreams are about. thank you so much for joining with me. Wish you syudy English well!
P/s: You said you still have some ideas, please keep sharing. ^_^

Tiêu đề: Re: NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS! Thu 9 Oct 2008 - 5:32

Well, "the hair pin" wrote a lot to mention about the real situation of young generation in our country, we all know that it is a hard issue for our government to solve nowadays. What they are doing is just to develop the country faster and faster, they pay less concern on childen who have no home to stay. To be honest, I myself also pay less concern on them, whenever I meet them on the street, I have no question about them, just the strangers. I just care about my family and my relatives. If I have a wish, I'll wish firstly for them, not for strangers, just because I'm not a great person or a hero. Then if I have 2 wishes, I may use the second wish for "strangers" hehe...
That's just for joke. Think about the more simple thing, the more worthy value in your life to strive for. What we did, do and will do may for ourselves, for our family, for the one we love and may for our country!

Tiêu đề: Re: NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS! Mon 20 Oct 2008 - 10:11

Hi Piggy Osin,
I agree with your opinions, but I think that if we well care about myself and my family, we have partly contributed to the construction of our country.
About me, I wish become a wealthy man. I know, this is also dream of all people in the world, but, with me, It's will come true, different of almost people, because I had my own plans, detail plans, and also perfect plans. Hihi, just my thoughts.^^.
If you have dreams, it's good, but not enough, dreams and your efforts for your dreams. I always remember them, and now I do all for my dream. For my wealth in the near future.
P/S: Although I tried all my best but sure that have many mistakes, so I hope you help me identify them. ^^

Tiêu đề: Re: NEW TOPIC TO DISCUSS! Tue 21 Oct 2008 - 2:32

Heee...well done! Sometimes I wonder if I should correct the others' mistakes or not. (I should know who I am, right?) All for your wish, I will try my best.
You wrote :"I wish become a wealthy man"

It should be :" I wish to become a wealthy man (in the future)"
Or " I wish I would be a weathy man (in the future)"

"It's will come true, different of almost people"
Should be "different FROM"
If I have any mistake, please tell. Thanks!
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I consent to your ideas. To get success, we not only have dreams but only make a lot of efford. Our dreams tell us what to do and how to do, morover drive us run onto a right way. I have dreams and you also have your own dreams. Let's try our best to shoot the target! My teacher said:"try, try again and you will succeed" . That's always true, right?

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